参联会文件 cc312fc_2 -JP 3-12注释

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JP 3-12, Doctrine for Joint Nuclear Operations (FC) UNCLASSIFIED
ITEM # SOURCE TYPE PAGE PARA LINE COMMENT RATIONALE DECISION
(A/R/M)
JP 3-12 Comment Matrix Combined Sorted 21 Dec 04.doc as of 12/16/04 Page 1
of 147
Only incorporate comments with a blue A.
They include the other changes (appropriately modified in some cases)
and have been adjudicated by the JSDS.
1. USN
S
0.0 GENERAL COMMENT: There is very little of substance in
this pub. Recommend all but the essential material dealing
with nuclear operations be removed.
There is repeated reference to how critical it is that nuclear
and conventional forces be integrated, but there is no
explanation of how to do this.
Conciseness and relevance to the
title of the pub.
M – JSDS
comment –
I'm sure we
all have
attempted t
o
add value to
substance o
f
the pub –
however
man
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thin
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s
remain
under
developmen
t
in classified
fora, like th
e
integration
discussion.
2. 2 NORAD A 0.0 Joint Pub identifier and page number locations inconsistent
throughout document. In some cases one or the other or both
are missing.
Accuracy
A
3. 1 EUCOM A 0.00 2 13 UNDO change 19 from the previous comment matrix (i.e.,
change back the text so that it reads as follows):
It Joint Publication 3
-12 provides military guidance for the
exercise of authority by combatant commanders and other
joint force commanders (JFCs) and prescribes doctrine for
joint operations and training. It provides military guidance for
use by the Armed Forces in preparing their appropriate plans.
It is not T
the intent of this publication is not to restrict the
authority of the JFC from organizing the force and executing
the mission in a manner the JFC deems most appropriate to
ensure unity of effort in the accomplishment of the overall
mission.
Semantic. Although there are in
fact several “it”s in the text at this
point, replacing “it” with the
name of the publication halfway
through this paragraph forces the
reader do a double-take to ensure
that the publication being read
actually is JP 3-12 and not some
other. Also, the change in lines
16, 17 is counterproductive.
Before the change, the sentence
meant that restricting the JFC was
not a goal of this pub; the revised
wording of the sentence means
that the pub has as one of its
sp
eci
f
ic
g
oals not to restrict the
A
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